Words, a heap of them I burnt today,
Not much use are they,
To his retreating back,
I could not say,
Stay,
Watch the moon rise,
Here, pull me close,
Whistle a love song, make me laugh,
Breathe a little warmth in my frozen lips,
Tell a thousand sweet lies,
To my half closed eyes,
The promise of tomorrow,
Thats all I ask.
6 comments:
Your words are so beautifully crafted and powerful :) SPLENDID!
Brought to my mind a famous song "I CANT MAKE YOU LOVE ME" by bonnie raitt.
new in here, so do check my blog and comment n if gud enuff followup...you have earned a folower btw :)
ummm btw i dnt see the followup option here :/
Caught you, 'Red handed' :) thank you so much for your genrous words!
I'll have to check on the follow up option :) technically challenged.
It is just Awesome.. well what do I say.. I'm falling short of words.. Simply superb.. Very beautifully brought out...
Hey twenties girl, thank you, ia m glad you enjoyed reading 'Promise me Tomorrow'.
very nice thoughts! beautiful!
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