Can joy be big or small, I need to know?
The dark clouds play hide and seek with the blue ones,
Sketch shapes in the sky,
Make way for the Moon,
Ripples in the water flow gingerly,
The invites have been sent,
Wind sits by the bench,
Holding my gaze,
A little longer than necessary,
Words fall like stone in the water,
Dead weight,
The quiet night sinks in,
Nothingness, I try to carry back home,
Slipping through my fingers,
It has a nice feel,
Stay a while,
The man on the bench says to me...
6 comments:
Ismita…
First, I don’t have words to comment on this poem. “Sketch shapes in the sky, Make way for the Moon,”… “Slipping through my fingers, It has a nice feel, Stay a while,”... No words Ismita...
Then... ‘Love on the Rocks’ ~ well I missed to win your book in Blog Junta’s ‘To Have Loved and Lost’ Contest but I bought the book to read the romantic thriller as my interest and forte is ‘romance’. But... due to hectic work in office and some personal issues didn’t allow me to read the book.
Somehow, today I managed to read the novel at a stretch and I have to say, ‘One of the best novels I read’... Chanceless... ‘Sancha’ and ‘Aaron’.. What a character sketch.. I am amazed by the way, you confused me when I tried to predict the murderer. At some point of time, I felt Popeye would be the one but the green dollars once again confused me.. Wow.. You are awesome Ismita.. and I expected many romantic encounters between them but was little disappointed in that note..
And the way you ended pictures the chemistry between a hubby and wifey.. and in acknowledgements I found a phrase, ‘Torturous manuscript’ ~ is it? ~ Well this is one of the best script I have read.. ‘Thanks for blessing us this work of yours’.. ‘*****’ to you…
SmileS.. Can't stop typing.. because words can't say how I feel...
Someone is Special
forgot to mention.. I just love your poems.. and Part I poems was awesome.. 'The tinkling of glasses, raised to toast'... I love this..
Someone is Special
Hey you are surely "Someone Special" it just felt so wonderful to read your comments about LOTR. I am so glad you chose to write to me about how you found my debut work to be so good. Thank you so very much, Bless you!
Thank you so much Ismita.. I will surely write a review too.. Right now I am little busy with my Father's Operation, once everything is normal I will write a review in my blog.. If you wish stop by this link to know what happened in my life..
Somoene is Special (a.k.a Saravana Kumar Murugan)
@Sarvana thank you for sharing ur name with me...i had made a rather silly assumption that 'Someone is special' a woaman :) I wish your father a speedy recovery. I am sure everything will go smoothly. You be good!
Thank you so much Ismita for your wishes.. and I am glad to read your reply.. Thanks for taking time to stop by my blog.. Happy Man..
Someone is Special
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