She was pretty once,
Deep set eyes, the chiselled nose,
Pointed chin, lovely as a rose,
But that’s not the first thing you noticed about her,
They fell at her hip,
Swaying when she swayed,
A curtain of darkness against her dusky skin,
Plaited in summer,
In winter they were free,
Ogled, envied,
Charmed, where ever they went,
Such was the grandeur of her silky hair.
Oh, care she took of the crowning glory
The hot oil massaged the scalp,
Grandma’s long brush strokes gave them life,
She ate well,
Knowing, nourishment flows to the root,
Every day like a prayer,
The water that cleansed her soul,
Also cleansed her hair.
On her journey from a girl to a woman,
Every season,
They were grazed, chopped, experimented upon,
Colours, chemicals, commuting and pollution,
Work, stress and not to forget men,
Finally took the sheen off...
Adulthood comes at a heavy cost.
The beautiful face still stares back,
The deep set eyes, the chiselled nose,
But that’s not the first thing you notice about her,
They were ‘hair’ yesterday.
In desperation, she tries them all,
The fake TV ads, the false promise of attractive bottles,
But none soothe the frayed strands,
Lies are sold at a high price,
And then,
And then she stumbled upon Dove,
Nursed to life,
They now frame her face,
That’s the first thing you notice about her,
In Dove, at last, she has found true love...
8 comments:
Happy iPad days Ismita.. Beautiful Poetry.. The lines describing her childhood are too good, the stressful teenage and the end.. wow.. Loved it so much.. Best wishes..
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the last line.. 'In Dove, at last, she has found true love..' As usual your finishing touch.. Wow.. Superb Ismita.. Can't just comment once.. If you are free stop by my blog to enjoy a romantic treat ~ 'Dove'...
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Lovely poem...Great work.. beautiful quotes.. Here is my take on the subject - http://zradar.wordpress.com/2011/11/10/the-hairy-fairy-tale/. See if you like it..
Beautiful quotes and an apt title.. I hope u too find ur love with dove..Good luck on the contest..Here is my take on the subject - http://zradar.wordpress.com/2011/11/10/the-hairy-fairy-tale/. See if you like it..
@SISpl...thank you so for your good wishes, wish you the sma e and more!
@Ranting Indian, thank you so much! Good luck.
@Zardar...thank you for your kind words and hope you find 'Dove'too :)
Well written post :) Very nice poem i loved it..
all d best wishes. :)
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BEA....utiful.... :) Loved the ending - the last line!!!
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